From f9d2ee1232090d9087f110d3299bdfae3ed2eab9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Justin Pryzby <pryzbyj@telsasoft.com>
Date: Thu, 9 May 2019 18:50:42 -0500
Subject: [PATCH v2 2/2] Add commas: "Previously,"

---
 doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
index cc48960..3f9893e 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ Do not allow multiple different recovery_target* specifications (Peter Eisentrau
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Previously multiple different recovery_target* variables could be specified, and the last one specified was honored.  Now, only one can be specified, though the same one can
+Previously, multiple different recovery_target* variables could be specified, and the last one specified was honored.  Now, only one can be specified, though the same one can
 be specified multiple times and the last specification is honored.
 </para>
 </listitem>
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ Change XML functions like xpath() to never pretty-print their output (Tom Lane)
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Previously this happened in some rare cases.  ACCURATE?  HOW TO GET PRETTY PRINT OUTPUT?
+Previously, this happened in some rare cases.  ACCURATE?  HOW TO GET PRETTY PRINT OUTPUT?
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ Allow partitions bounds to be any expression (Kyotaro Horiguchi, Tom Lane, Amit
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Expressions are evaluated at table partitioned table creation time.  Previously only constants were allowed as partitions bounds.
+Expressions are evaluated at table partitioned table creation time.  Previously, only constants were allowed as partitions bounds.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -515,7 +515,7 @@ Allow parallel query when in SERIALIZABLE ISOLATION MODE (Thomas Munro)
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Previously parallelism was disabled when in this mode.
+Previously, parallelism was disabled when in this mode.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ Store statistics using the collation defined for each column (Tom Lane)
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Previously the default collation was used for all statistics storage.  This potentially gives better optimizer behavior for columns with non-default collations.
+Previously, the default collation was used for all statistics storage.  This potentially gives better optimizer behavior for columns with non-default collations.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -1532,7 +1532,7 @@ Allow the streaming replication timeout to be set per connection (Tsunakawa Taka
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Previously this could only be set cluster-wide.
+Previously, this could only be set cluster-wide.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -1825,7 +1825,7 @@ Use all column names when creating default foreign key constraint names (Peter E
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Previously only the first column name was used.
+Previously, only the first column name was used.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -2329,7 +2329,7 @@ Allow control of log file rotation via pg_ctl (Kyotaro Horiguchi, Alexander Kuzm
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Previously this was only possible via an SQL function or a process signal.
+Previously, this was only possible via an SQL function or a process signal.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -2697,7 +2697,7 @@ Properly honor WITH CHECK OPTION on views that reference postgres_fdw tables (Et
 
 <para>
 While CHECK OPTIONs on postgres_fdw tables are ignored (because the reference is foreign), views on such tables are considered local, so this release enforces CHECK
-OPTIONs on them.  Previously only INSERTs and UPDATEs with RETURNING clauses that returned CHECK OPTION values were validated.
+OPTIONs on them.  Previously, only INSERTs and UPDATEs with RETURNING clauses that returned CHECK OPTION values were validated.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
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2.7.4

