Typo in parallel.sqml

Started by Tatsuo Ishiiabout 9 years ago3 messages

ishii@sraoss.co.jp

about 9 years ago

I think this is a typo. Since I am not an English native speaker, I
would appreciate if someone confirm this.

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
index 7f8e902..02173da 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ EXPLAIN SELECT * FROM pgbench_accounts WHERE filler LIKE '%x%';

   <para>
     When executing a parallel plan, you can use <literal>EXPLAIN (ANALYZE,
-    VERBOSE)</literal> will display per-worker statistics for each plan node.
+    VERBOSE)</literal> to display per-worker statistics for each plan node.
     This may be useful in determining whether the work is being evenly
     distributed between all plan nodes and more generally in understanding the
     performance characteristics of the plan.

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Michael Paquier

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about 9 years ago

In reply to: Tatsuo Ishii (#1)

Re: Typo in parallel.sqml

On Fri, Oct 14, 2016 at 8:41 AM, Tatsuo Ishii <ishii@sraoss.co.jp> wrote:

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
index 7f8e902..02173da 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ EXPLAIN SELECT * FROM pgbench_accounts WHERE filler LIKE '%x%';

<para>
When executing a parallel plan, you can use <literal>EXPLAIN (ANALYZE,
-    VERBOSE)</literal> will display per-worker statistics for each plan node.
+    VERBOSE)</literal> to display per-worker statistics for each plan node.
This may be useful in determining whether the work is being evenly
distributed between all plan nodes and more generally in understanding the
performance characteristics of the plan.

Indeed. It looks like a bad copy-pasto of two sentences gathered together.
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Tatsuo Ishii

ishii@sraoss.co.jp

about 9 years ago

In reply to: Michael Paquier (#2)

Re: Typo in parallel.sqml

Indeed. It looks like a bad copy-pasto of two sentences gathered together.

Thanks! I will commit/push to master and 9.6 stable branches.

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