[doc] minor wording improvement in a couple of places

Started by Ian Lawrence Barwickabout 6 years ago3 messageshackers
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#1Ian Lawrence Barwick
barwick@gmail.com

Hi

On these pages:

https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/fdw-callbacks.html
https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/tablesample-method.html

we have the phrase:

"..., which see for additional details."

which strikes me as a bit odd. Suggested phrasing:

"...; see this file for additional details."

Regards

Ian Barwick

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Attachments:

t42909_1
doc-see-for-additional-details.patchtext/x-patch; charset=UTF-8; name=doc-see-for-additional-details.patchDownload+4-4
#2Magnus Hagander
magnus@hagander.net
In reply to: Ian Lawrence Barwick (#1)
Re: [doc] minor wording improvement in a couple of places

On Mon, Sep 7, 2020 at 6:34 AM Ian Barwick <ian.barwick@2ndquadrant.com>
wrote:

Hi

On these pages:

https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/fdw-callbacks.html
https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/tablesample-method.html

we have the phrase:

"..., which see for additional details."

which strikes me as a bit odd. Suggested phrasing:

"...; see this file for additional details."

I agree this sounds very weird. However, this phrasing is also fairly
common in comments around the code.

I was first guessing that this came out of one of us non-english native
speakers, but AFAICT it's a mix of authors and definitely including those
natively speaking the language.

I would still suggest that we change it, because it does sound odd to me as
well, but I'll defer a bit and see if others might think we should keep it.

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#3John Naylor
john.naylor@enterprisedb.com
In reply to: Magnus Hagander (#2)
Re: [doc] minor wording improvement in a couple of places

On Mon, Sep 7, 2020 at 6:30 AM Magnus Hagander <magnus@hagander.net> wrote:

On Mon, Sep 7, 2020 at 6:34 AM Ian Barwick <ian.barwick@2ndquadrant.com> wrote:

"..., which see for additional details."

which strikes me as a bit odd. Suggested phrasing:

"...; see this file for additional details."

I agree this sounds very weird. However, this phrasing is also fairly common in comments around the code.

Seems to be a literal translation of Latin "quod vide" (q.v.), so
intentional, just sounds a bit old fashioned. I'd vote to keep it.

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