Log Message:-----------Made changes per Lance's suggestions plus a little more re-writing.
Modified Files:-------------- pr/releases/8.1/en: release.txt (r1.6 -> r1.7) (http://cvs.pgfoundry.org/cgi-bin/cvsweb.cgi/press/pr/releases/8.1/en/release.txt.diff?r1=1.6&r2=1.7)
