[Minor] Improve reading in "2. A Brief History of PostgreSQL"
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Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/18/history.html
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Where it says "A new program (psql) was provided for interactive SQL
queries, which used GNU Readline. This largely superseded the old monitor
program."
a "for its purpose" should be added for improving reading:
"A new program (psql) was provided for interactive SQL queries, which used
GNU Readline. This largely superseded the old monitor program for its
purpose."
Thanks!
On Thu, 2026-09-24 at 21:05 +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/18/history.html
Where it says "A new program (psql) was provided for interactive SQL
queries, which used GNU Readline. This largely superseded the old monitor
program."
a "for its purpose" should be added for improving reading:
"A new program (psql) was provided for interactive SQL queries, which used
GNU Readline. This largely superseded the old monitor program for its
purpose."
Sorry, but I think your proposed change makes the sentence worse:
- "its": whose?
- you don't supersede "for" something
Yours,
Laurenz Albe
On Fri, Sep 25, 2026 at 5:18 AM Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>
wrote:
On Thu, 2026-09-24 at 21:05 +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/18/history.html
Where it says "A new program (psql) was provided for interactive SQL
queries, which used GNU Readline. This largely superseded the old monitor
program."
a "for its purpose" should be added for improving reading:
"A new program (psql) was provided for interactive SQL queries, whichused
GNU Readline. This largely superseded the old monitor program for its
purpose."Sorry, but I think your proposed change makes the sentence worse:
- "its": whose?
the old monitor program - which I assume from the text that it's what it
was used before for interactive SQL queries
Show quoted text
- you don't supersede "for" something
Yours,
Laurenz Albe