Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes
Hello everyone,
I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14
Release Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A
patch to fix them is attached.
One of the replacements changes
"which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
"to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"
because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or
just add a comma before "which").
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Elena Indrupskaya
Lead Technical Writer
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Attachments:
rn_14_language.patchtext/x-patch; charset=UTF-8; name=rn_14_language.patchDownload+5-5
On Tue, Jul 20, 2021 at 03:58:00PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
Hello everyone,
I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14 Release
Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A patch to fix them
is attached.
One of the replacements changes"which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
"to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or just add a
comma before "which").
Thanks. I added a comma as you suggested, and committed.
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