[very minor] Documentation suggestion
The following documentation comment has been logged on the website:
Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/15/logicaldecoding-synchronous.html
Description:
Very minor suggestion. Earlier on this page, commands are referred to that
can cause "a deadlock". Later on the page, it says "cause deadlock".
https://www.postgresql.org/account/comments/new/15/logicaldecoding-synchronous.html/
"Note that these commands that can cause deadlock"
I think that may also be grammatically correct, however I thought "a
deadlock" (adding the "a") sounded smoother to me when reading. Suggestion
below (adds "a" before "deadlock").
"Note that these commands that can cause a deadlock"
On Fri, Oct 21, 2022 at 02:19:12AM +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
The following documentation comment has been logged on the website:
Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/15/logicaldecoding-synchronous.html
Description:Very minor suggestion. Earlier on this page, commands are referred to that
can cause "a deadlock". Later on the page, it says "cause deadlock".https://www.postgresql.org/account/comments/new/15/logicaldecoding-synchronous.html/
"Note that these commands that can cause deadlock"
The full sentence is:
Note that these commands that can cause deadlock apply to not only
explicitly indicated system catalog tables above but also to any other
[user] catalog table.
What I think it means is:
Note that these commands, that can cause deadlock, apply to not only
explicitly indicated system catalog tables above but also to any other
[user] catalog table.
so with "a" it would be:
Note that these commands, that can cause a deadlock, apply to not only
explicitly indicated system catalog tables above but also to any other
[user] catalog table.
but it still needs help ;-) Here is the text I just applied:
Note that these commands can cause deadlocks not only for the system
catalog tables listed above but for other catalog tables.
Attached is the applied patch to master.
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